Today vanessa watch the completed parts of our music video and told us what we should improve this consisted of :
GOOD POINTS:
-Narrative element is good and is perfectly filmed 
-The choreography is very good
-The solo's are very good
-Some good elements of camera angles
-Locations go well with the narrative and the theme of the song 
-The open mic audience scenes are very good

IMPROVEMENTS:
-Refilm the TV Studio and include more close ups than long shots
-Include some cutbacks instead of separating the two locations, this will portray your editing techniques


From the feedback given we have decided to refilm the TV studio scenes paying more attention to the different camera angles and keeping the camera in focus. To be able to do so we need to contact the main actors to see if they are free again for filming either this week or next.