The audience and the teachers gave points of improvements, what they liked. We also asked the audience whether we should edit every green screen element to black, to have it all green or the have a mixture of both and they gave us their opinions on that.
The parts they liked was the camera angles, the choreography, the cutting rate, the vibes given off by the actors, crowd and dancers and the narrative. The majority of the audience preferred that we have a mixture of the green and black, one comment by a classmate Courtney was "the green adds a pop of bright colour as the song is quite vibrant and upbeat."
The parts of improvement was to add some more footage as it was a bit heavy on one side with the same continuous location. Also at the beginning we could introduce the song by making it muffled so it seems like he's listening to the track on his phone. Danielle wanted to see more of the people dancing at Stratford more as it adds something more onto the video and Vanessa wants to see more close up lip sync in the video.
ACTION TAKEN:
We both appreciate the feedback given by the audience and the teachers, from that we have decided to mix some of the green and black backgrounds, also to add on more footage of close ups and other locations at the other half of the video so that it evens out everything. With the help of the technician Tom we would be able to create a muffled introduction to the song instead of using two different songs in the introduction.
this is the rough copy feedback that me and my partner conducted in class this video includes the opinions of members of our class as that they are giving us advice on how to improve our music video.
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